Hello everyone
We were challenged to watch a video and then write about it through the Eyes of the main character.
we watched a video called High Diving Giraffe's It was about a Group of Giraffe's that were Diving into a pool from a great height It was interesting to write about with describing words and about the characters and i found it very fun to write about.
As we traveled up the stairs we were Excited but a bit nervous because it was Higher than we imagined. As cameras flashed in my Eyes The other Giraffes ran up on the diving board. There was a Giraffe hanging on a Trapeze. It was finally my turn I was a bit Nervous about it but I was ready as I ran down the diving board I thought this was my chance to show my friends that I was just as cool as them. I jumped, grabbed on to him and did a flip into the pool. Then I was in the water and everyone was cheering for me. I was proud as I watched the other Giraffes do cool tricks. After that we all went for a drink in the pool but suddenly we heard a noise. It was the pool owner! We thought let's run! One of my friends said as we ran out of the pool.
This is where I watched the video from
Have you ever Watched this video?
Kia ora Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great post! It's nice to see that when you put your mind to it, you can create something very professional looking! Just Remember to think 6! Next time you should describe more about what you thought about the actual episode.
Nice work otherwise! Keep it up!
Thank you for your feed back. I'll edit it now :)
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