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Friday, March 26, 2021

Quality Gmail

hello everyone 
This week we had to try make a quality Gmail this is my one  I have labeled it so that you know which is which I think I did really well on this let me know how I did I really enjoyed making this
have you ever done something like thing?
see you next time!

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 16, 2021 at 10:46 AM

    Hi Phoenix, Tayla here!
    I really like your Email it's really good. One thing you could maybe change next time is when you say Hello to everyone put a capital H at the start of Hi and also you could put in some , so it's not one big long sentence. I remember doing this last year when I was year 7. Overall it's really good!

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    1. AnonymousApril 16, 2021 at 11:36 AM

      Thank you! I really need to update this, Anyway thanks for the feedback I will update this soon, And also I usually put , But I could not be bothered, Anyways thanks for the feedback and I will see you next Term.

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  2. SamApril 16, 2021 at 11:38 AM

    cool phoenix good job

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