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Friday, May 21, 2021
Ed sheering
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Hi phoenix i like ed sheeran as well good blog but It would of been better if you listed some more songs but otherwise a verry good blog
ReplyDeleteHi Phoenix, I really liked your information about Ed Sheeran. I like how you added a song at the end so I know what his music is like. One thing I would fix is your title is spelt wrong because it has sheering :) but overall its very good! Tayla
ReplyDeletethe title was meant to be like that so it was catchy but anyway thanks!
DeleteHi Phoenix, I'm Matilda/Tilly from Kokatahi school. I really like your facts about Ed Sheeran. Again in your title it says Ed Sheering not Ed Sheeran. I really like the picture of him, but you could try and make your own drawing of him on google drawings or paper.
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