Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 13, 2021
how to make a quality blog comments
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Phoenix! I'm Tayla a year 8 in Toroa, I love your video you made, What I like about it most is the little characters you added to make the video more interesting to watch! Maybe next time you could leave the text on the screen a little longer so its easier to read, and also make the video a little longer! Overall I think its really well done. Tayla
ReplyDeleteHi Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea! I love that you have made something the others in the class could learn off. I have made a few biteables before but not a good as yours! Could you leave the text on the screen for a bit longer?
Mr Bell