Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, June 18, 2020
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2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hey Phoenix! Your big sister here, just casually doing some snooping! This was a pretty cool post, and I like the way you put everything together! I would like to point out some things however, like the fact that you are not 9 yet, and that I'm a tad confused as to whether your favourite thing is 'video games' or the 'game controllers', so you might want to specify.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you have heaps of comments on other posts that you haven't replied to yet, and I get it; some of them are girls, so it could be embarrassing, but it is only polite to reply! Especially if they ask a question or give you a recommendation, so keep that in mind!
Otherwise good job !
Thank u for the info LOL
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