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Thursday, June 25, 2020

Launching to the Moon!



Hello everyone

This week is another writing week this week we had to do writing on us on the moon i only had one day to do it because i was away sick for half of the week so i had about a day to finish but i finished it in a day pretty easy if you just think about what your doing and how to do it and i think i did a good job and i hope you had a good day Bye!!!!! :3
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  1. AnonymousJuly 31, 2020 at 11:02 AM

    HI phoenix my name is Tayzsar and i go to Waikohai Primary School. i wonder what it feels like to be in space,it is so cool that you can fly and float and the bestest thing is that you get a clear vue of the stars. i really liked how you seed that you were in a rocket to go to the moon and maybe you couled add more information to. see you later Phoenix.

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    1. AnonymousAugust 3, 2020 at 1:55 PM

      Thank u for your opinion and info i will edit now! [ :

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